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Una redaccion con el pasado simple de inglés?

Una redaccion con el pasado simple de ingles.

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Cómo hacerlo

  1. Haz una lluvia de ideas y decide qué quieres contar sobre ingles?.
  2. Organiza el texto en tres partes: introducción, desarrollo y conclusión.
  3. Usa conectores (primero, después, por último) para enlazar las ideas en orden.
  4. Cierra con una conclusión que resuma tu idea principal o cómo te sentiste.
  5. Relee el texto para corregir la ortografía, la puntuación y evitar repeticiones.

En resumen

Approximately a million years ago, a spaceship entered a new universe and landed on a small planet. Inside the spaceship, thecreatures studied their instruments. The atmosphere was perfect. The temperatures were perfect.

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Approximately a million years ago, a spaceship entered a new universe and landed on a small planet.

Inside the spaceship, thecreatures studied their instruments.

The atmosphere was perfect.

The temperatures were perfect.

The creatures opened the doors of the spaceship ; they walked onto the new planet.

They breathed the air ; they studied the rocks and the water.

The leader said "We are very fortunate.

This water is clean.

The air is clean.

The conditions here are perfect.

"

The others thought "We've got a second chance.

We ruined one planet.

We can't ruin this one.

Here we must live without factories and machines and technology.

We can eat these plants and animals.

"

The leader said "We can start again here : the conditions are perfect for humans.

".

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Una redaccion con el pasado simple de inglés?

Approximately a million years ago, a spaceship entered a new universe and landed on a small planet. Inside the spaceship, thecreatures studied their instruments. The atmosphere was perfect.