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Redaccion de 150 palabras sobre una fiesta que tuve, un cumpleaños o un concierto al que podía haber asistido?

Redaccion de 150 palabras sobre una fiesta que tuve, un cumpleaños o un concierto al que podía haber asistido. UN EVENTO PASADO. (DOY 50 PUNTOS).

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Cómo hacerlo

  1. Haz una lluvia de ideas y decide qué quieres contar sobre 150 palabras sobre una fiesta que tuve, un cumpleaños o un concierto al que podía haber asistido?.
  2. Organiza el texto en tres partes: introducción, desarrollo y conclusión.
  3. Usa conectores (primero, después, por último) para enlazar las ideas en orden.
  4. Cierra con una conclusión que resuma tu idea principal o cómo te sentiste.
  5. Relee el texto para corregir la ortografía, la puntuación y evitar repeticiones.

En resumen

My mother's birthday was on December 20. She had a great party. Many people came : my grandparents, my aunts and uncles, my cousins and some friends. It was a great meeting. The food was excellent : chicken, turkey, salads, and a lot of desserts. There was an orchestra too.

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Naomicarbajal01
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My mother's birthday was on December 20.

She had a great party.

Many people came : my grandparents, my aunts and uncles, my cousins and some friends.

It was a great meeting.

The food was excellent : chicken, turkey, salads, and a lot of desserts.

There was an orchestra too.

It played some oldies, and also some tangos because my mother was turning 45.

She loves tango so we thought she would like to dance and sing.

When she was young she used to sing in a choir.

She comes from Buenos Aires and tango is the typicalmusic from Argentina.

She was given many presents for her birthday : some jewels, pieces of furniture, clothes and best of all, a new red car.

It was our gift for her.

We really enjoyed the party a lot.

It was a terrific party!

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Redaccion de 150 palabras sobre una fiesta que tuve, un cumpleaños o un concierto al que podía haber asistido?

My mother's birthday was on December 20. She had a great party. Many people came : my grandparents, my aunts and uncles, my cousins and some friends. It was a great meeting.