Quiero saber si este resumen esta bien :this story is about a boy called nick?

Quiero saber si este resumen esta bien : this story is about a boy called nick. He wants go to australia because in this place there is a surf´s competition, but his parents dont like surf, because they says the surf is very dangerous. Every day nicks tells his parents and say that the competition is very important for him, but not. A saturday in the beach, nick meets janelle, she is a tall girl with long black hair. Then, a gather more money for the travel that australia, he went another competition, in wich the first prize was a thousand pounds. "But he lost", because brian, the boyfriend of janelle hit his arm. But, after one of the jurors went to tell him and says that he saw what had happened, and nick gave the first prize. Then, nick´s father told nick that he saw that he was surfing very well, and that he could go to australia.