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Quien me puede corregir este texto es para un trabajo del insti decirme cualquier fallo que veáis. Este es el texto : In the year 2185 we the human beings will live for the whole space. In this year you can go of trip to different planets as for example the J1407 b that is similar to saturn but nicer. There in the future they will have a few machines that are used you to teleportation from a galaxy to other one though also the spaceships exist. In this epoch the standard of living will be more advanced to ours, there the persons can manage to have more than 200 years. Also they will have created cure for different virus and even for the cancer. In the medicine already there will no be doctors only there will be robots nurses who never have failures. You prop already almost nobody works for that the robots do everything, from intelligent houses, to printers of houses 3D. In this epoch the way of have fun is so called " lace neuronal " that will consist of connecting your brain with a computer to be able to see or play actually increased.