Porfavor me podrian ayudar como se pronuncia y si esta bien escrito mi parrafo porfavor, good afternoon teacher and classmates I'm going to talk about places I met on my vacationsmy family and I trave?

Porfavor me podrian ayudar como se pronuncia y si esta bien escrito mi parrafo porfavor, good afternoon teacher and classmates I'm going to talk about places I met on my vacations my family and I traveled to ipiales nariño colombia to the sanctuary of Our Lady of Las Lajas in which we decided to go to church We started our way to the sanctuary to be going down some stairs, When we arrived we listened to the mass and when we finished we took pictures outside the church and we traveled in the cable car where we could appreciate the waterfalls and the green grass and the parks, where we looked at those beautiful views.