InglésBásico8 de marzo de 20261 respuestas

¿Podría alguien corregirme esta redacción de inglés?

¿Podría alguien corregirme esta redacción de inglés? Es de nivel de 1ºBachillerato. DO YOU LIKE HORROR STORIES? I don't like horror stories at all. In fact, I hate them! , specially I hate those which are based on actual eventes. I get goosebumps whenever I see an horror film. Sometimes, I play it off, but really, they send me over the edge. I'm easily freaked out, so I tend to stay away from horror stories and horror films. Nevertheless, why do people like to read scary stories? Do they do it for a lark? Researchs have shown that horror stories get your body ready for action by giving you and extra dose of adrenaline. People like whatching horror films because they make them feel alive. One efect of this is that horror stories, moreover, make you feel strong emotions and they encourage you explore the unknown. Actually, seeing horror films, that is to say, whatchinghair raising experiences, is one of the favourite hobbies of teenagers.

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Haz una lluvia de ideas y decide qué quieres contar sobre inglés?.
Organiza el texto en tres partes: introducción, desarrollo y conclusión.
Usa conectores (primero, después, por último) para enlazar las ideas en orden.
Cierra con una conclusión que resuma tu idea principal o cómo te sentiste.
Relee el texto para corregir la ortografía, la puntuación y evitar repeticiones.

En resumen

DO YOU LIKE HORROR STORIES? I don't like horror stories at all. In fact, I hate them! , specially I hate those which are based on actual events. I get goosebumps whenever I see an horror film. Sometimes, I play it off, but really, they make me scream a lot.

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Angelabalsamo11 ene 2026

DO YOU LIKE HORROR STORIES?

I don't like horror stories at all.

In fact, I hate them!

, specially I hate those which are based on actual events.

I get goosebumps whenever I see an horror film.

Sometimes, I play it off, but really, they make me scream a lot.

I easily freak out, so I tend to stay away from horror stories and horror films.

Nevertheless, why do people like to read scary stories?

Do they do it for a lark?

Researchs have shown that horror stories get your body ready for action, giving a extra dose of adrenaline.

People like watching horror films because they make them feel alive.

One effect of this is that horror stories, moreover, make you feel strong emotions and they encourage you to explore the unknown.

Actually, seeing horror films, that is to say, watch lurid experiences, is one of the favourite hobbies of teenagers.

No tenías muchos fallos yo también estoy en 1º de bachillerato si tienes alguna duda te puedo ayudar, espero que te sirva.

Chao.

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