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Escribir una redaccion de inglés de 130 palabras con el siguiente tema : is it important for young people to have their own independence?

Escribir una redaccion de ingles de 130 palabras con el siguiente tema : is it important for young people to have their own independence? Give reasons.

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Cómo hacerlo

  1. Haz una lluvia de ideas y decide qué quieres contar sobre ingles de 130 palabras con el siguiente tema : is it important for young people to have their own independence?.
  2. Organiza el texto en tres partes: introducción, desarrollo y conclusión.
  3. Usa conectores (primero, después, por último) para enlazar las ideas en orden.
  4. Cierra con una conclusión que resuma tu idea principal o cómo te sentiste.
  5. Relee el texto para corregir la ortografía, la puntuación y evitar repeticiones.

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G1o2r3d4a5
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For all people is

important to have his own independence, because from it depends, that in a

future young’s had kinds of qualities like responsibility and also that they will

know the value of things, all this combined with the possibility or an

economical stance, today a lot of young people that had more than 21 they still

living with his or her parents, then, to prevent that is very important to us

or as well, to our children, the importance of had his own independence, of course

later than an specifically age, another method to prevent this, could be, that

the parents of children give the more freedom, because many of children, has

been under protected by his parents, this difficult that in a future, kids

could get their own independence.

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- Cristhian.