AYUDA CON Inglés?

AYUDA CON INGLES. Necesito de preferencia a alguien que sea maestro(a) de ingles o alguien que tenga una certificación de alto nivel para revisar este escrito (importante añadir el nivel de ingles en la respuesta). Es para un examen oral, es un escrito del tema "Childhood Memories" Favor de corregir lo necesario Y TAMBIÉN, tomar en cuenta este criterio por si en el texto no se uso correctamente : ""usar would para situaciones melancólicas, used to y past continuous para cosas que me hicieron enojar"" El texto es el siguiente! Have you ever had a flashback of a memory from when you were an infant? In the same way, have you ever sat there and wished you were a little kid again? Well, that happens to me, and even if you do not remember it probably has happened to you. Where do I start…? My life is like a roller coaster and my grandparents sheltered my childhood. I was nurture with love and concern. I was the one girl in the family ; in consequence, everybody doted on me. My grandmother taught me many valuable lessons about life, including humanity, laughter, strength, and most importantly the value of family. Nevertheless, when I was at primary school I was always suffering bullying from my ex classmates. They used to be rude to me. Even so, I never told to my parents or teachers. Currently, I do not remember their names ; but they would say things to me like “you are fat or ugly. ” Sometime afterwards, I would stop care about how I looked like. On the other hand, I am not only going to tell you bad news about my childhood. When I was a young child, I would love to hear my parents tell me that we were going on a trip. I would be full of excitement because I knew that we would be going to a place that I had never seen before. My parents, and I packed our luggage and ventured out in our small red car. I used to wander like a butterfly in the open fields, enjoying the natural beauty of those places. Furthermore, since I was a child, I loved to write. My mom told me that I used to spend my time drawing and writing some letters to my parents on my bedroom. Moreover, I used to watch some movies. My favorite was Lilo & Stich and I would tell to my mother that I wanted to see that movie all day. To conclude, in my book childhood is the happiest time of our life because when we are child we get excited about everything, we learn as well as we have a better imagination. Finally, we don’t have to worry about take decisions, and we had fewer responsibilities compared to an adult. ​.