ALGUIEN QUE ME DIGA SI ESTA BIEN ESCRITO ?

ALGUIEN QUE ME DIGA SI ESTA BIEN ESCRITO ! Porfisss! : - D : - D : - D On my next holiday, I’m going to california . I’m going to stay in a hotel in the city center. I’m going to visit all the important sights, and I'm going to spend some time at the beach. I'm going to visit my relatives, I'm going to eat a lot of seafood, we are going to visit the vegas, then we are going to go sightseeing around the city. The last week of august my sister and I are going to the village to visit my grandparents, we are Going to the ranch to enjoy the nature , we are going to cycling breathing fresh air. After visiting all that, we will eat traditional food in the center of the city. I'm going to a party with my friends to drink lots of beer.